Pray And Ask

Through god's love and all his heavenly might,
all things we receive from him as blessings
in the end are all well worth the fight.

He is life, he is love, and as you feel the darkness
of satan trample upon your heart and start to take
away the love.  

Pray to him.
That overwhelmingly powerful feeling
that you're feeling right now,
is the lord's warmth from above.

Ask for his help.
Father please help me prepare myself for this fight.
Do you feel it,
the lord's power from above.

Can you see the light.
Oh can you see the light.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

The power of prayer is immense. It unlocks doors , heals hearts , suture relationships , fill us with light , make us humble , teaches us thankfulness and appreciation , self- discipline us , prepare us for the battles of life , forgives our sins , gives us hope in the afterlife. So whanever we pray sinscere prayers we will reap one of these benefits... A very good write as always...:)

[kelvin]

yes thanks for the very good review and thoughts here and i do agree with you on this. thanks for the wise words as you always seen to have hidden in your back pocket hahaha.

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha ... I like your answers too... You are welcome...:)

[Sami Khalil]

I might pull some money too from the back pocket...LOl

[kelvin]

hahaha I hear ya that would be good wouldn't it .

[Sami Khalil]

Do you prefer cash or check...LOl

[kelvin]

hahaha any will do for both are currency that can be spent i got one of those slide machine for checks and credit cards I keep it handy in such cases as this hahaha

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha . Maybe one day a currency exchange too... :)

[kelvin]

Its in the making to got to start from somewhere right haha.

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[SparrowSong]

I agree with Sami, the power of prayer is immense, if one allows the love to pour in, one can feel how powerful his light can be. Nicely written Kelvin.

[kelvin]

Thank you very much for you thoughts here. Long time no see my friend haha

[AYVID N]

Truly inspiring and almost like a prayer in itself Kelvin. What I love about your writing is the simplicity yet elegance with which the thought is coveyed.

[kelvin]

Well thank you very much for your kind words, for pryer is a powerful thing for those of us who believe thanks again.

[AYVID N]

I like that you too are religious. I am too. Its great.

[kelvin]

Yes it is

[NaugleB]

Prayer can be the strongest tool a person posesses. This is breathtakingly beautiful. I actully printed it out framed it, and put it on my desk at work as a daily reminder. This is a brilliant work of art, fantastic job!

[kelvin]

Now that took me off guard there thank you very much for you kind words. I'm speechless for words you have made my day thanks again

[Frieda P]

I wasn't going to read this once I read the title, but I thought it best to pay respect to your poetry and not our beliefs here. It's an extremely inspiring piece to be quite honest, I just don't see the light. Well written, as always.

[kelvin]

Ok well i do thank you for showing respect and yes we all don't share the same beliefs but we all can respect each others and live the best we can thank you again fellow writer. I still wish you all things that's good and may you prosper.

[Marie]

Heartfelt poem...or prayer...
Change "satin" to "satan"

[kelvin]

thank you and I'll take care of that misspelling glad you spotted that for i looked several times and looked over that