Life Within The Rain

Rain itself lives just as we do as
clouds are being formed
its giving birth to a
storm.

Like life is created from the
intercourse of a
man and woman.

It lives its life as it pours and falls
down to the earth,
as we live our lives
walking and transporting
ourselves on earth.

It converses with the wind, blowing
and whistling down to the earth,
as we converse amongst ourselves
in our daily life's worth.

It eats away at the wind and the
atmospheric pressures as it
gains strength to live,
as we eat for Nourishment to gain
our strength
to live.

It can be calm and very pleasant,
and lets not forget wild and very deadly,
as we have the pure nature to be tranquil 
and very deadly.

At some point the rain dies and then it dries
back to the earth, as we do when we die
we go back to the earth.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think though it isn't very much here.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

You have depicted the cycle of life very beautifully. Rain rises from the earth and dissappears back into earth after fulfilling it's life-giving purpose. Dust unto dust. Rain is a celeberation of life. But it can also turn acid and lash us to a violent devastating end if we stretch Nature beyond limit. Great poem on Rain Kelvin.

[kelvin]

Thank you very much for taking the time to read this I appreciate your thoughts always

[Frieda P]

I'm not sure how you can make that statement 'isn't very much here' you captured the circle of life in your beautiful words. Beautifully pen'd kelvin.

[kelvin]

Thank you very much for your thoughts on this read I'm glad you think this is a good read thank you again.

[ms. barrie]

It can be calm and very pleasant,
and lets not forget wild and very deadly,
as we have the pure nature to be tranquil
and very deadly.

At some point the rain dies and then it dries
back to the earth, as we do when we die
we go back to the earth.

-- this is exquisite in both being profound and unique imagery. this whole poem is wonderfully penned. very descriptive and an enjoyable read, thanks for sharing!

[kelvin]

Well thank you very much for your nice kind words. sometimes we as writers can find the smallest things to find inspiration upon. Thank you again for taking the time to read I really appreciated it.

[ms. barrie]

very true and you are very welcome. i love nature and i love the uniqueness you portrayed in this piece regarding nature, and like-wise :)

[kelvin]

thank you

[ms. barrie]

you welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

This is unique with a lot of factual information on life and death and its relationship to rain and clouds . You create some good observations. Keep writing and raining on us with your needy rain... :)

[kelvin]

Thank you very much fellow writer i really appreciate it.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Acron 4]

What we do in life when we describe our lives is perceive those actions and objects around us, and compare them with what we already know. Aristotle noticed this, that men generally describe one thing in terms of another 2500 years ago. He never did anything with It, however he did call it metaphor. For 2500 years it has more then anything else been just a part of speech. There have been studies of late that have proven that metaphor is a cognitive process. It is a process that every man is born with, and it has over the period of time man has been on the earth become the basic infrastructure of all his cultures and languages. very very good poem..........thanks for sharing.

[kelvin]

Thank you very kindly for your kind words here and your facts on the issue of metaphor. thanks again i appreciate it

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

There is much here Kelvin. You have penned life has it moves in motion. :)

[kelvin]

Thank you so much for your intake here. I appreciate it a lot.

[Marie]

Good analogy...life as storm...as rain...

[kelvin]

Thank you very much glad you think it good I appreciate it

[Shellie]

My favourite type of writing is anything that makes me react. This did that.
I just love it all to be honest, AND the tone is gentle and then rapid in places..like rain! only noticed that halfway through. The very last stanza is my favourite, and a perfect way to end a perfect poem. x

[kelvin]

Thank you very much for your kind thoughts here I'm so glad you liked it

[SparrowSong]

It isn't very much? These cycles of life, we live, we die...a sweet conversion as the rain, it pours, it lives, it seeps into the earth and dries, but not before it gives nourishment, as our rain gives to the soul. I think there is a lot here, we can learn a lot of ourselves from nature...as we are a part of the nature in which we live.

Superb pen, one of my favorites :)

[kelvin]

Well thank you very much I'm glad you like this read. I appreciate it a lot.