Rose Petal Kisses

A kiss from over rose petals
melts hearts in the milky twilight,
as one's destiny crosses paths
with next.

Bringing all what's good to the
future, and what's bad to its
past.

So to you my love, I say upon
you let us kiss.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

'melting hearts in milky twilights' Wow!
you are fast becoming a real favourite.
This is just so good, reminds me of chocolates and candle lights!

[kelvin]

Thank you so kindly I'm really glad you like this one.

[ms. barrie]

exquisite imagery that you have portrayed in this piece. this a wonderful ode to all the hopeful romantics out there. brilliant poem! thanks for sharing and Happy New Year 13' to you and yours :)

[kelvin]

Thank you very much my friend for your kind thoughts here and Happy New Year to you as well.

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome, it's an enjoyable read to say the least :)

[kelvin]

Well glad you enjoyed it.

[ms. barrie]

:)

[Marie]

Very nice love poem...do you mean "peddles" or "petals"? Either would give the poem a slightly different meaning.

[kelvin]

Yes thank you I'm meant petals didn't even realize the fact of thank you for bringing this up to mean i must change this and the title thanks so much

[kelvin]

i meant bringing this up to me

[sirenribbon@thehptshirt..]

Love the ending of this poem. Really this is a smart lovely piece. I love the Yin Yang quality, back and forth, with not a lot of words...Cheers to Romantics, cause you are one son!!!

[kelvin]

Well thank you kindly

[Carolann Dowsett]

Beautifully interwoven words of love

[kelvin]

Thank you very much i do appreciate you kind words

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow . I,m amazed . I did not know you a the hopeless romantic too . A very nice poem especially the ending ... :)

[kelvin]

Yeah I guess a man of all sorts hahaha you could say thank you very much for your intake here i appreciate it truly.

[Sami Khalil]

I agree . You are a man of many talents . You are welcome... :)

[kelvin]

Well thank you as you are as well.

[Sami Khalil]

:)

[SparrowSong]

Lovely how a moment melts away the past, holds clear the future and all is suspended in the breath held before a kiss. Sweetly written.

[kelvin]

Thank you very much I appreciate your intake on this my friend.

[SparrowSong]

You are most welcome :)