Ah, death , the great equalizer . The one gives us or ends our suffering... We are going to join the party so better accept it wisely. Some people become wiser before death and some just give up and surrender completely.
By the way is there any dance in the party . Lol just to the last part... :)
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11 Years Ago
hahahaha I guess it will plenty of dancing there that's funny. Its a party we all will join some day
Well it's not a party I'd like to join anytime soon, but I hope it's fun when I do go!
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11 Years Ago
I'm not ready to join it myself not at this time hahaha you hope its fun maybe full of fun dancing a.. read moreI'm not ready to join it myself not at this time hahaha you hope its fun maybe full of fun dancing and all other things we enjoy right hahah thanks again
Wow again!
You outdid yourself here!
The grim reaper is sure impartial.
But hey Kevin! I would prefer a fair and equitable non-racial world to death!
100/100 here for superb depiction of death.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you very much yes I agree with you there for we see what kind of world we live in in the livin.. read moreThank you very much yes I agree with you there for we see what kind of world we live in in the living with those issues why would we want it in death right. Thanks again my friend
Like the way the grim reaper is now the dancer , a party to be enjoyed. It is humbling leave your prejudice , your material stuff your family friends come only as you are. I am not ready to join the party though!
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11 Years Ago
hahah I'm sure not ready to go myself thank you for your thoughts here
I'm not sure death is an easy Muse, that being said there is a quality that went along with these words. I also appreciate the fact you wrote on the most serious of serious subjects and you let us all finish up on light note.Cheers!!!
Death certainly is not discriminating, and how unique is your approach to this one. I, like others, am in no hurry, but I am sure gonna like to be reunited with some when the time comes. Well done!
Yes this i agree with you on I'm not ready but will love to reunite with all we known and loved that.. read moreYes this i agree with you on I'm not ready but will love to reunite with all we known and loved that passed even our beloved biblical figures
Ah, death , the great equalizer . The one gives us or ends our suffering... We are going to join the party so better accept it wisely. Some people become wiser before death and some just give up and surrender completely.
By the way is there any dance in the party . Lol just to the last part... :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
hahahaha I guess it will plenty of dancing there that's funny. Its a party we all will join some day
I like how you created a new image of death as being a party. Most people portray death as the most dreadful thing. And your right death doesn't discriminate, maybe the death bringers but not death itself. I'll join the party much later when I'm ready ha ha. Nice poem.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you as I don't want to join that now either hahaha thanks again for you intake on this read he.. read moreThank you as I don't want to join that now either hahaha thanks again for you intake on this read here
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