Pencil Loves Paper Not

I give a circumcision to the
head of my pencil.

While it introduces itself to
the paper, and then they have
full intercourse.

Flowing gently across the paper's
pale body and beautiful blue lines,
no curves at all just simply straight
blue lines.

Oh could this be love?
Most certainly not love.

For the paper states to pencil,
this is the end of our show.

For we must part our separate
ways with no emotion, leaving
the pencil's lead oh so broken.

Oh poor pencil there's more
pages you will kiss before
your end, listen to this notion.
Fix yourself, for right now,
your lead is simply broken.

Author's Note

Just a simple little way of creative thinking. Tell me what you think enjoy

Reviews

[Frieda P]

I love how you maneuvered all the sexual innuendos and connotations into this write, very clever! I guess writing is a lot like making love, there's much coddling and attention to be had, then the final payoff is always sweet when you get it right! Nice...very nice. ;-)

[kelvin]

Thank you very much for you intake on this read here I do appreciate it to and i agree with you they have similarities

[kelvin]

hahaha i agree no sword use and thank you very much very nicely put your thoughts here and i really appreciate it very much my friend thanks again

[Sami Khalil]

You are quite welcome... :)

[Sami Khalil]

Pen, writing, love , emotions ... Now that is really creative in the way you connect the dots and cross the t's . And the twist you use is the pencil will end at a certain time as our brokenness or starting a new page in life. Love is mightier of course than the pen and the pen is mightier than the sword . I hope they don't use swords for circumcision...Lol to the last part only...A very unique write...:)