I'm back, and I'm black, and on the attack, like a vigilante on all of you who hurt and mistreat the less fortunate through lies and hateful acts.
Don't you dare look down upon thee. For I look down upon you as I strike you with all things bad of life's mishaps that you could ever have.
The same ones you pushed down, lied upon and stepped all over, are the ones in time you may need.
As i feed my need of lust and desire for your misfortunes, I recycle others misfortunes and stow them upon you.
But only ten times worse.
The ones you often laughed at when they cried, as their hearts turned to mere liquid, and fell into a cup, that you poured on the ground in the filthy dirt to dry.
Are some of the same ones you come to for comfort as your heart turns to liquid and you ask yourself why.
I indulge myself in the fact of feeding on your life's tragedies and watch as you crawl in a corner fetal position and drown in slumber.
So I ask of you, hey my friend why are you drowning in life's slumber. Oh how rude of me, let me introduce myself. For I am a entity no God of misery only disguising myself to be known as Bad Karma!
If you believe in what comes around goes around or not this was written on the saying or statement of that merely ideally written it just came to it and I just wrote it as it came straight from my head straight to the site here so I'm sure when i look at it again when writing it down with fresh eyes I will be editing this tell me what you think
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I have read this a couple of times now, and I can't help but here the Rolling Stones, Sympathy for the Devil in my mind. Again, you have a creative way of looking at things and making the reader pause for thought, nicely done!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Well Thank you so kindly for your intake here i appreciate it very much i do
I agree with Sami Khalil, Karma is very real. Although I think of as something in the nature of "building up good karma." What you are writing about seems to be an entity, which may very well be real also.
Yes, I think you will want to edit this poem--tighten it up a bit more.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
yes i agree there is karma out here both good and bad. as i look back over it with a fresh set of ey.. read moreyes i agree there is karma out here both good and bad. as i look back over it with a fresh set of eyes it does seem more like a entity of some sort. i think i may even use entity in the end of it as well thank you addressing this to me as i value your thoughts thanks again
Karma is real and it defines our relationships. What goes around will come around for every action has to have an equal and opposite reaction. No doubt about that... So we can't go in life mistreat our fellow man and kill, rape and pillage without justice for it will be paid one way or another. There are laws that God put within ourselves and in nature that no one can change or violate... His will will be done whether we like it or not... He is The Sovereign God...
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Yes indeed but just as i believe in karma the next may not so i wrote in the essence of the name kar.. read moreYes indeed but just as i believe in karma the next may not so i wrote in the essence of the name karma for things do happen and as you speak in theory of equal and opposite reactions i agree with this wrote this tonight simply in the fashion of the word itself if you get what I'm saying and thank you for you once again positive intelligent thoughts
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