Man's World

A man once said in song, he stated this is a man's world.
This i agree, but no wait, wait, wait, audience let me state
my claim. For if it wasn't for the reproductive factory
built within a woman, man couldn't exist.

Oh yes man has to stick his key within the woman's
keyhole to unlock the gates of life.
But it is the woman's factory where she works
24/7 days a week for nine months building alone man's life.

So yes this is a man's world on both sides.
For the word man is also spelled in the word
woman.

So as it was said in song that its a man's world, but
in the same song its also stated that it wouldn't
be nothing without a woman or girl.

Author's Note

Actually this is god's world for he created it for us. this is the statement made its a man's world only in male domination but where does it leave the women. Tell me what you think on this read I was inspired by the godfather of soul. Every person have their own self proclaimed world of their own but this is not the case in this read

Reviews

[J. J. Nightingale]

"So God created man in his own image, in the image of God created he him; male and female created he them." .. Genesis 1:27

"And the LORD God said, It is not good that the man should be alone; I will make him an help meet ~ Genesis 2:18

Sorry your poem made me remember these verses .. Come on now, we all know "It's a Woman's World" .. Ha. .. I like your poem ( and I am a big James Brown fan)

Jazzy

[kelvin]

hahaha oh really now. Glad you liked it and don't be sorry for it reminding you of these verses that's not a bad thing. and yes i like James Brown to. thank you for your thoughts on the read

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome .. J. x

[Sami Khalil]

God created the opposite sexes and made it a dual world with equal value but each with a unique responsibility that fits their own capabilities. Financial responsibility for a woman and children is man's sole one although women can work( she can chose either way) but he can't blame her if she wants to be a house wife only and if she works that is her own money that she can share or not ) and be a helper . It falls on the man . Having the children and raising them in a good home is a woman's responsibility but the man has to be a guide and role model as much as the woman... Woman have the right for education and inheritance and voting and to run for public office too... I believe it is a partnership between a man and a woman and that they have to compromise all the time on issues to whoever has the best argument...He or she can be right and wrong... Like Ms. Marie said we have to share the world not just with sexes but with races and colors and .....

[kelvin]

Exactly with all i agree with you all mankind you hit this red head on and gave a one two knock out punch with a very great view here this is a very good sum up thank you for this great review on your thoughts with this read I appreciate it

[Sami Khalil]

You are always welcome my fellow poet... :)

[Marie]

Men and women--we all have to share this world. And we have equal parts to play. A man's world i made through a woman.

Is the "godfather of soul" you refer to James Brown?

[kelvin]

I agree Exactly you get what I'm trying to say.Thank you Miss Marie and yes I'm talking about you said it James Brown. Thank you again I enjoy hearing your thoughts

[kelvin]

In actuality the physical world is god's for he created it. This is where the saying goes this is a man's world. everyone has their own state of mind in having their own world but this is not the case of the statement here. the sense is man as males running things leaving women to sit back and be on the sidelines when women have just much right to have a say so, for if it wasn't for woman how can man exist. so what said this world for the humans us all simply

[Akira Kodama]

An...interesting piece. I don't think the world as a whole belongs to anyone. Each individual person's "world" is their own. I understand what you're saying here, but I'll have to disagree with you. Good write.

[kelvin]

actually its nobody's world but gods for he created it. Im meaning the world as in the whole the lands, trees, bodies of water and so on as who makes the things in the world work and go on who in charge for women has much right to do things and has say so in what goes on here to not ones own state of mind being in their own world sorry you misunderstood this read but your entitled to your opinion and thanks for sharing your views and thoughts