What Creeps In The Night

you can fool yourself to be scared

Eyes that twinkle in the twilight of the night. Like reflections of broken diamonds sparkling from the moons light.

 The moons light creates silhouettes and images of grizzly frights within the night. Your mind is in terror, and your body's stiff with fright.

 A breeze blows through the leaves and trees, and embraces its hand upon me oh so fine. Which channels energy like a beam of electricity sending wicked chills curdling down my spine.

 The sound of vegetation being disturbed gives a ire thought, that you may be being followed.
Oh Its a fright!
But may the truth be known its only the nocturnal critters that roam through the night.

Author's Note

would like to know what everybody thinks

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Fear in your head . We all go through that in our nights... Shadows , voices , flashing images , sounds in the woods , ghostly cries that will instil real fear in the weak-hearted where our emotions take over our senses. But if we all realize , it is only nocturnal critters then our minds won't feel that fear. A very different write and I really enjoyed it...

[kelvin]

you nailed it I agree thank you for your thoughts

[Sami Khalil]

Smiling...

[yellowfeelings]

this is really amazing (:
you've described night times sounds and fear perfectly.
I'm really scared of the dark, last night i was sleeping in the same room as my sister, she snores very loudly as well as that it was really dark in the room, i was so scared haha so it's nice to read this poem that I'm not the only one who experiences the darker side of night time.

[kelvin]

Thank you for you thoughts and glad you found it nice to read

[kelvin]

takes you there walking on a lonely dark wooded road with no lights just the moon shining bright and every sound triggers your mind into thinking its all things that bump in the night what do you think