Lingering Dreams

dream and it meaning

My mind and my thoughts they glimmer,like a dream captioned in misty grey. But the illustrations of this dream show sadness like the skillful shadings of an artist lingering by each stroke of his brush.

 My dream show visions in vivid detail like the characteristics of sadly trying to grasp myself to what's reality and what's not.

 I see the same people saying the same things encrypted in different nationalities, languages,and emotion. So I take the same sip from the same cup and it puts all my misunderstood into its proper focus.

Plus my clarity has been heightened as if I'm watching this dream in its highest of high definition.

 So is it this dream what's putting me in the twilight of what's real and what's not or my conscious mind giving me false insecurities of what's to come and what's not.

Reviews

[Becky]

Nice imagery and wording, though the formatting threw me off a bit at first. I'm not sure if you were posting it from a phone or something or if that was how it was intended to show up, but it's a tad distracting from the writing.

But I really did like the wording. It's kind of a unique take on an often-not-unique topic. Well done.

[kelvin]

thank you for your comment

[Marie]

Dreams are generally your subconscious mind taking images from your life and showing them to you. If your dreams have heightened clarity, it's because you are a poet and images are all-important to you.

[kelvin]

well thank you for your thoughts on this read here i appreciate it.

[Sami Khalil]

I like this write a lot especially the ending lines...Thank you for sharing and keep penning your message...

[kelvin]

thank you for taking the time to read and comment

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure . You are welcome. Thank you too...

[kelvin]

welcome to you to

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Natasha]

I agree with Marble Mountain below about the formatting, it reads like a journal entry to me, not a poem, but maybe you meant it to do that!!

overall, you have some excellent writing, i think the best lines where the first two, especially "thoughts they glimmer, like a dream captioned in misty grey"--love that one!

good work!

[kelvin]

thank you so much for your words

[Natasha]

you are very welcome!!