Dying to  live

Dying to live

A Poem by kelvin
"

life and death destiny purpose

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In life there's many trials and tribulations on
this self pertained path we take in life known to be
the bad and good, 
or we could say righteousness.                          
But if the subject of death is brought up, 
and held on to in it's captivated spirituality in just. 
So if we are here to live in just,
we are most certainly destine to die.

© 2013 kelvin


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Life has a purpose as well as death so it is up to us to find our purpose in each and direct our choices towards that whatever makes us happy , healthy and wise but wisdom and discretion are very important to apply for it can make us just towards ourselves and others. I love how you said it : "We are here to live". End of quote and not to die although it is in our destiny for death is a doorway to another dimension.It can be a higher one or lower one...
Awesome write. Simple but packs truth...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

I totally agree. You can run but can't hide from destiny...:)
kelvin

11 Years Ago

Yep yep
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)



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I think you'd better take a look at the last three lines. THey're a bit jumbled.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

Thank you I was just changing it, if we are looking at the same thing thank you for catching that wi.. read more
Life has a purpose as well as death so it is up to us to find our purpose in each and direct our choices towards that whatever makes us happy , healthy and wise but wisdom and discretion are very important to apply for it can make us just towards ourselves and others. I love how you said it : "We are here to live". End of quote and not to die although it is in our destiny for death is a doorway to another dimension.It can be a higher one or lower one...
Awesome write. Simple but packs truth...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

I totally agree. You can run but can't hide from destiny...:)
kelvin

11 Years Ago

Yep yep
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)

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Added on December 10, 2012
Last Updated on March 22, 2013
Tags: life, daeth, living, dying

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I like to write and enjoy reading other s and what they have to say or express. i like to write from my life and experiences and that of another putting myself in someone else shoes writing from thei.. more..

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