Acid and Flash

Acid and Flash

A Poem by hardeep sabharwal

Now hours have been passed,
Or may be years ago,
She told, I don't like,
When on the road,
Flash of light, from a car or bike,
Make my face so blingalicious,
Monsters eyes anatomizing the expressions,
As if to hold the feelings of soul,
Faces are not souls,
But souls have faces,
A day, this flash of light on face,
turned into Acid,
Award for refusal to a demon,
The face, the soul,
The little earth and my little sky,
And all those dissected feelings,
Collectively burned,
The orbits of living,
To dance, to chirp, to joy, to achieve,
The background and foreground aspirations,
Are only to hide,
Only to hide life,
I crave, yes I crave,
Only for medieval Justice,
A face for a face,
A soul for a soul,
And Acid for the Acid .

© 2015 hardeep sabharwal


Author's Note

hardeep sabharwal
Acid attack on women are most cruel crime,, we have seen many incidents, I believe only medieval justice is the justice in this case.

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An ugly man may still go far in the world of business, finance, war - the worlds of men. It may be a shame but, it is not the same for an ugly woman. Even Medieval Justice will not equalize for men and women are not equal, we are not the same. Woman was made to nurture man. Man was made to protect woman. We are both failing. Our society crumbles. Everyone pays. Unequal payments.
A magnificent poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Very well said, I agree with your words, thanks a lot for a nice review



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An ugly man may still go far in the world of business, finance, war - the worlds of men. It may be a shame but, it is not the same for an ugly woman. Even Medieval Justice will not equalize for men and women are not equal, we are not the same. Woman was made to nurture man. Man was made to protect woman. We are both failing. Our society crumbles. Everyone pays. Unequal payments.
A magnificent poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Very well said, I agree with your words, thanks a lot for a nice review
That ignorance should stop. It is so cowardly and wrong. An excellent write...:).............

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot sir
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).................
Acid on a woman. This is a terrible act. I understand the anger. Bad deeds need the same act in return. It had become a scary world. Thank you for sharing the powerful words and meaningful words.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
an unusual poem Hardeep about an abhorent subject, indeed it is hard not to call for the most extreme punishment for the perpetrators of such horror's, great writing from you on a sensitive crime so terrible :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thank you Richard sir

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patiala , punjab , India



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Hardeep Sabharwal describes himself as person of few words. He is one of millions of middle class Indians who do not have any ideology; they only want to live a peaceful life. The thing that hurts him.. more..

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