A Third Class Poem

Written for MomzillaNC poetry challenge about Plagiarism

One, who is so boasting about his pen,
With an eagle's eye watching pages in the den,
Picking words of others like a crow's beak,
And sewing these words with tailorbird's tweak,
Decorating the work as cunningly as fox,
Making a document in pdf or docs,
Pompously showing and feeling so glad,
Dont know why his soul so empty and sad,
You can cheat all and even cheat God,
But with your soul, can you fraud?
I know that your conscience is already dead,
So I want to boil your nads in bat guano up to your head .

Author's Note

Yes, I am a third class writer, but at least not a plagiarist

Reviews

[Bright Ocean Star]

You used good rhyme scheme and rhythm with difficult words to rhyme, and you described the cheating, lying, pestilent-filled creep's activities perfectly. It was shorter than I wished, because I enjoyed reading the rhymes. Nice writing! Thank you for sharing this one in the contest...:)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much :)

[MomzillaNC]

Hardeep, this is great option for the challenge. I thought you were posting for the contest, "Boiled In Bat Guano." You should post this on the group "Poetry Challenge" page instead. For the contest, the poem must end with the plagiarist "boiled up to his nads in bat guano."

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much, I will try to write one more piece on this topic

[MomzillaNC]

Were you going to add a line or two to this one for the contest?

[hardeep sabharwal]

I have added two lines, though I don't know it will work or not

[MomzillaNC]

Not quite -- it really must be his nads (gonads, balls, testicles, etc.) boiled in bat guano (bat poop, bat s**t, bat droppings, etc.).

[MomzillaNC]

"So I want to put boiled water on your head." A suggestion for this line to fit the contest:

Could be something like, "Wanna boil your nads in bat guano up to your other head."

[MomzillaNC]

Hardeep, if you change the water to bat guano, I can add this to the roster of approved entries.

[hardeep sabharwal]

I have changed the line

[MomzillaNC]

Great! I'll approve it now.

[R Smith]

1................

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much Richard sir :)

[MomzillaNC]

Vote for yourself and then the rest of the entrants, Hardeep.

[hardeep sabharwal]

1...... :)

[R Smith]

3....................

[Fran Marie]

3 .................

[realmwriter]

.........2

[MomzillaNC]

Good job, Hardeep

[Jesse Booker]

Very nice read. I sense a bit of rage in it, which usually makes good poetry!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much

[MomzillaNC]

Boiled In Bat Guano contest at http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Boiled-In-Bat-Guano/50802/

[Fran Marie]

A great piece on plagerism...can't understand why some thieves would steal another's words and claim as their own...they're empty souls ...so sad indeed..well done..

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much :)

[Matching Socks]

Good poem Hardeep.
It's a shame this stuff happens...

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Ana

[Coyote Poetry]

You are not a third class writer my friend. You are a amazing writer with good thoughts and amazing words. Words cannot be owned. With the internet. We have little protection. I don't concern myself with people stealing my words. I liked the Bob Dylan quote. "If you steal my words. Please write them better.' Thank you for sharing your thoughts on a important topic.
Coyote

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much

[Rene Salinas]

Hi Hardeep. Nice to see that you are involved in a group. I was caught in the middle of this unaware as it is always the case with me. I actively reviewed most of CVG's writings only to find out later by someone called Christopher that CVG was not such a pure hearted writer. Blocked & gone. But it doesn't stop there. Tim Relic has a few writings on the nature of some of the people that come to this site. I will sugest to read that as if one was to show all the negativity is only fair to encompass the whole rainbow. The ones that belittle others, the ones that only want to be reviewed, the ones that have inflated egos, the ones that are seeimingly above others, making fake id's deceiving people. Like I said Tim has done it before. It seems this kind of effort came a little too late. Now we are just floating, submerged swimming in the thick of it all.

I hope you do well in the challenge!

Thankyou

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much for the things you told and for suggestions, I am in my learning phase as a writer and these things helps a lot to understand and view the world of writing in a broader aspect, I read your review on Richard s writing and I m whole heartedly agree to your words,
thankyou so much

[MomzillaNC]

Rene, this particular plagiarist that inspired all this poetry on the topic has more aliases than a hydra has heads. Noel and KLGoode have tracked more than 20 of his aliases. And, if you Google his name, he comes up on many other writer's forums as a plagiarist too.

[Rene Salinas]

Wow! That's just disheartening. It gets more complicated... I did not know that anf frankly Denise not sure I want to...

[MomzillaNC]

So, help lambast him! Enter my contest, "Boiled In Bat Guano." http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Boiled-In-Bat-Guano/50802/

[Rene Salinas]

Alright then! I can't say no to a contest can I?