A Third Class Poem

Written for MomzillaNC poetry challenge about Plagiarism

One, who is so boasting about his pen,
With an eagle's eye watching pages in the den,
Picking words of others like a crow's beak,
And sewing these words with tailorbird's tweak,
Decorating the work as cunningly as fox,
Making a document in pdf or docs,
Pompously showing and feeling so glad,
Dont know why his soul so empty and sad,
You can cheat all and even cheat God,
But with your soul, can you fraud?
I know that your conscience is already dead,
So I want to boil your nads in bat guano up to your head .

Author's Note

Yes, I am a third class writer, but at least not a plagiarist

Reviews

[Bright Ocean Star]

You used good rhyme scheme and rhythm with difficult words to rhyme, and you described the cheating, lying, pestilent-filled creep's activities perfectly. It was shorter than I wished, because I enjoyed reading the rhymes. Nice writing! Thank you for sharing this one in the contest...:)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much :)

[Avinash]

This is a good one Hardeep.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou Avinash

[Sindu]

A great heartfelt piece from a heartfelt writer. I wonder how depressed one should be to feed on others' creativity!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much sindu

[bunny]

Nice try to fetch the ambiguous realty

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much :)

[MomzillaNC]

Boiled In Bat Guano contest at http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Boiled-In-Bat-Guano/50802/

[Saddam]

You can cheat all and even cheat God,
But with your soul, can you fraud?

Absolutely agree with you Sir. A very inspired write.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much

[MomzillaNC]

Boiled In Bat Guano contest at http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Boiled-In-Bat-Guano/50802/

[Pushkar Prabhat]

believe it or not.........these people cheat their souls too............
beautifully done!!!
loved it!!
:)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot :)

[AYVID N]

This is a first class poem. That makes you a first class writer.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much Divya,
a few days ago someone told me that I am a third class writing, though I took that also in a positive manner

[AYVID N]

Wow! All I would say is that we should take construtive feedback in a positive manner but not take deliberately mean remarks lying down. All the best with your writing.

[Marie]

You are not a third class writer; I am--at least my poetry is. I think we all use others' words--sewing them with "tailorbird's tweak"--because there are only so many words available to us. I hope that I never plagerise, though.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Very well said, we have a fewer vocabulary,, only we present our emotions by tweaking the words,, some are even not capable of that, so they copy,, as for as your poetry is concerned, it is good and I have always liked your expression,
Thankyou for a nice review.

[M.A.Rathore]

"If you steal my words, please wrire them better" suggested by Coyote. You can take inspiration from anywhere as the great writers used to take but copying from others and then publishing under ones name is not a good job or rather a punishable crime.
As for as your poem is concerned it is superbly written with beautiful diction. Thanks for sharing so lovely poem with good message. Hardeep sir..

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Rathore g

[M.A.Rathore]

You're welcome...

[M.A.Rathore]

You're welcome...

[M.A.Rathore]

You're welcome...

[George Peck]

I love the poem, and I think your a first class writer not third. This was a nice read and I love the flow. Thank you as always for letting me read.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much George

[MomzillaNC]

Boiled In Bat Guano contest at http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Boiled-In-Bat-Guano/50802/

[Ankit Mahar]

So true. There are so many people who copy other's work and then tell it as their own. This poem is amazing and sends a great message

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot :)

[MomzillaNC]

Boiled In Bat Guano contest at http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Boiled-In-Bat-Guano/50802/