Between the right and wrong

It is not that,
I am here with my own wish,
You can fantasize,
More innovatory,
Try to sniff it,
And elaborate that,
It is not one dimensional,
My eyes are pasted on my heart,
Two eyes, two heart,
A heart within the heart,
And my thoughts are,
No man's land.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

I have read this one several times... thinking.. look at title, and read again.. the more I read the more I see and the more it makes me think.. what is the right?.. what is wrong?.. why no man's land?.. are you taunting the reader?.. or are you saddened by the status?.. sniffing out the inventory and inspecting the goods seems very cold and calculated and would surely keep those eyes open and protective... very thought-provoking.. As always such a joy to read your works..

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much :)

[Prabha Salimath]

Beautifully written Hardeep with perfectness and its very moving I feel.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Prabha

[Maglia Weaver Twill]

No man's land, I had forgotten about that place. Thanks for reminding us of it, in the world in which there is no battle ground just a land without conflict that belongs to no one

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot :)

[Sami Khalil]

"Two eyes, two heart,
A heart within the heart,
And my thoughts are,
No man's land."

A well written and conveyed poem. Thank you for sharing...:).................

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much sir :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..........