Desire

When you were leaving for a unique desire,
The spirit of my normal wish, drooped
Under the clumsyness of my skin,
In an era of whist, when emotions remain
Coiled, or like a barren womb,
A paralyzed cloud of feeling could not
Shed love on unsound reason,
Yes, I am insipid in my intoxicated nature,
Who shed voluptuousness of its skin,
In utter disgust and in search of truth,
And truth was always my El-dorado,
Ocean, I took you to merge myself,
Compose me and give me rhythm,
I am a mad in my composition, as
My unique desire is my normal wish.

Reviews

[Mayank]

This is a very good write when you are very much clear with the things you want/desire. There are lines which are beautifully crafted and are quite matured, these are things we must understand and follow... it was refreshing, like blowing an old dust from window sill.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much mayank :)

[Sreenath]

This poem Kindles the emotion in itself. Enjoyed reading it. Keep smiling.

[Jesse Booker]

Nice work. I enjoyed it as always!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks dear friend

[Baby Ricochet]

You know over here Eldorado is a big a*s Cadillac. Great poem. I got a rise out of it

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou Baby Ricochet

[Prabha Salimath]

Beautifully written Hardeep I liked it.

Ocean, I took you to merge myself,
Compose me and give me rhythm,
I am a mad in my composition, as
My unique desire is my normal wish. These are very heart touching lines.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot prabha :)

[June Fowler]

A paralyzed cloud of feeling.....love on unsound reason !hummmmm......yah, difficult to love some one who is unfaithful, specially when ur looking for someone who is truthful and sincere, very rare in to-days world I feel.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot June :)

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Nice poem Hardeep. Beginning with being normal to identifying a desire that is unique yet normal is expressed nicely. The flow is good, the words perfect. Lovely work.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Dipanjan :)

[Wandervogel]

simple yet so nicely penned......

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much :)

[R Smith]

nice the way this begins with one leaving because your too normal and ends when you see your unique desire is normal, lovely poem for those of us with simple desires, thank you Hardeep :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much Richard :)

[George Peck]

What a wonderful poem. The flow is great as always, I love it. Thank you for sharing with me.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou george for always being so kind