Love and Dust

Nothing lasts, you said, gently tying,
The laces of your fashionable jogging shoes,
With a glistening in your eyes,
That put our love in the morgue,
As if love was a race just to win a medal,
My mouth was filled with the dust of your words,
Like a modern prep student, I nodded,
The April sky laughed,
The blossoming flower's fragrance screamed,
In the most beautiful municipal park of city
Come, take some rest,
My bed ' s arm welcomed,
The puzzled street lamp covered with
Chase of moth ' s love,
Laughing on the post modern notions
Your words are true perhaps,
About the finiteness of all things,
Even of love, as you said,
Eternal is just, an ancient word,
But my heart shouted, you know,
One thing is there, that still last forever,
And I changed myself into dust,
To make my love everlasting.

Reviews

[Prabha Salimath]

Eternal is just, an ancient word,
But my heart shouted, you know,
One thing is there, that still last
forever,
And I changed myself into dust,
To make my love everlasting.

these lines are really beautiful Hardeep. To make your love eternal taking the form of dust is firstlt everseen nice job.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much prabha

[Shiny]

I loved it totally. Beautifully written. Loved the title too. Thanks for sharing.

[Anahat]

A nice read and full of emotions!
Keep up the good work :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

thank you so much

[blaqpearl]

emotions expressed brilliantly here...
enjoy reading it....

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much :)

[Alex]

A beautiful poem, I'm intrigued by the line the puzzled street lamp covered with the chase of moth s love. What were you meaning with this...
Very enjoyable.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much for the review, This line says that neither lamp is burning self, neither moth can die for love, their love is puzzled, moth went from one lamp to other and lamp is also not faithful, love is just a game that every one just play

[June Fowler]

lol, sounds crazy but yes love is blind and does make u do crazy things, thinks like dying so u can go on loving the person for ever and ever.......'Eternal is just, an ancient word", beautiful words friend, yet even today they r evergreen.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou June for the read and review :)

[June Fowler]

u are welcome.

[Surya pradha]

beautiful, strong lines. my fav poem of yours. really good stuff!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot surya. :)

[Jesse Booker]

Very emotional and thought-provoking, as is the norm with your work! Very well done!

[hardeep sabharwal]

thankyou so much jesse

[Angad Waraich]

This a great write the emotions run deep in this piece and they are well expressed on paper.
This is a really nice piece.

Well done.
Thank you for sharing.
Angad

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much Angand

[HungryGhost]

Oh my, I loved this so much.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much

[AprilRN1210]

the depth of your writing is always moving and thought-provoking.. it mixes emotional and spiritual effortlessly and beautifully.. the gentle tone mixed with the heavy subject intensifies the effects.. lovely imagery sprinkled within this piece as well.. there were a few places I stumbled, but overall very nice..

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot