The B*****d Truth

I buried all the b*****d Truth,
That are banished,
Being a cowered, the only idea,
That came to my pompous mind,
To cultivate this b*****d,
The legitimate politics and,
Marketing MBA media,,
That can sell even,
Your sorrows, your tears,
Your love, your rapes,
Your starving stomachs,
Your acid burned faces,
Your livers, your kidneys,
Your aborted wombs,
Your bribes, your corruption,,
Your hopes, your failures,,
And even your souls,,
So I thought to bury the soul,
And to utter astonishment,
Souls have no objections of being buried,
Under earth is a better place,
As being blind is better than to act blinds,
It does not matters,,
Look, look, it happens,
Yes, it does not matter to us,,
But when a time will come,
And it will matter us!!
We will already become only a matter,
The b*****d matter.

Reviews

[Dipanjan Dutta]

"And to utter astonishment,
Souls have no objections of being buried,
Under earth is a better place,
As being blind is better than to act blinds"

I truly like the poem, especially these lines. The truth of society, politics and us portrayed efficiently.

A small edit, it should be "all the b*****d Truths" instead of "all the b*****d Truth" in the first line.

Keep writing mate.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Dipanjan

[Dipanjan Dutta]

You are welcome

[Jesse Booker]

Great job! I especially liked the "Souls have no objections to being buried" line.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks for being so kind always

[Wandervogel]

like it.....good one...........

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot sir

[jennifer little]

nice work keep up the good work nicely worded and great flow to your poem keep writing

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot :)

[George Peck]

This was good. I don't like it as much as most other poems but I do like it. Just not my favorite

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou george for liking

[Pushkar Prabhat]

though the idea and setting are good, this more felt like a desperate scorned attempt. And i know that we would want this to be scornful but this seems forced.
otherwise, a great poem.
some grammatical errors are there, i think. Review it once if you get time.
i liked it.
:)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks Pushkar, for a nice review and kind advice, I will definitely look at this

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with the logic of the poem. Better words than b*****d. A b*****d is someone born without a father. I like the word naysayer and liars. Dirt bags and con artist. I like the drive and strength in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot coyote for read and review

[M.A.Rathore]

Wow! This is a thought-provoking piece that lets us think the proto-type people who can not see the reality what though it may stand in front of him right now he won't make his mind to be more divine and jusy swaying his way he leads his life and then as you describe brought to groung making a soulless matter.
The lines
.. So I thought to.......................
....the matter "is really the matter to think over. Nice writing...Keep it up..

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou sir for your kind words

[R Smith]

its sadly the way life has gone, we forget the spirit in favour of materialism, chasing wealth, our looks, our possessions, a return to spiritual values would be a good thing :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks you richard