Bye Forever

Written during my college days

Today, I am accepting, that I failed,
In my relations with all of you,
Can I say that it was all smooth,
And it is a sudden hamorrhage?
Just laughing, eating , sitting together,
To watch a few favorite movies,
Cannot help us to make things perfect,
No, it is not in my blood, to be,
Hippocritical and survive on the past,
A myth of paradise in a vacuum,
Filled with blunders and communal talk,
That burst and cover the entire state,
A heart, when it wants to mingle,
Should overcome trivial prejudices,
But ,when it was not in us,
Let us try to elaborate once more,
Meaning of true friendship,
And free ourselves for more options,
Or still better be alone with nature,
To satiate the hidden selves,
So it is the time I choose dear,
To say you goodbye, bye forever.

Reviews

[Neesir]

Its well composed and well expressed ..The lines give a strong impression on how the society creeps into darkness of misfortunes to have suffered from the hypocrites and how one tries to relieve himself off this infectious wound :
No, it is not in my blood, to be,
Hippocritical and survive on the past,
A myth of paradise in a vacuum,
Filled with blunders and communal talk,
That burst and cover the entire state..

very well written..

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou Avnee for a kind review

[Jesse Booker]

Well written, and very direct!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much

[George Peck]

what a great poem thank You for letting me read

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot friend

[amrit]

sheer melancholy . this piece is so lyrical, singing it while hitting them strings of guitar would be a bliss in itself . great job here .

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks amrit, much appreciated, glad you liked it

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and direct words. The best kind. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou dear friend :)

[Prabha Salimath]

I know how it feels at the end of college and saying goodbye. Good one I should say nicely written.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Prabha

[Matching Socks]

Deep melancholy presented here, sometimes saying good bye is the best course of action.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks Ana

[stars are far]

that was very sad, and well written. you have penned that well ..and remember always the Bye with someone is the Hello with other one... keep on writing

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much :)

[stars are far]

always my pleasure dear

[Pushkar Prabhat]

this amazed me..........all the things i want to shout out aloud, you have presented them beautifully.
i loved it!!!
:) :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou pushkar for a nice review and understanding :)

[Avinash]

College or rather any company with unruly and undeserving can become quite toxic. It can kill you from inside day by day. A pain very aptly reflected through your words. Soul can never take lies. The purpose of any bond is freedom of the soul through realization of truth.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Avinash