Madness

Do turn mad,
When beatan up to unbearable depth,
Of a conflicting cerebral chamber,
Suffocating under the mask of normality,
When different things are struggling,
Within you and without you, do not
Try to crush those contracted truths,
But let them feed on just as a,
Cuscuta, on the rot of your appearence,
Do not give meristematic touch to,
Your snobness, but be obsessed,
With the primary colors of innocence,
Feel the mirth of ignorance or be,
In the manea of being ignored,
Find the obsession within you, for you,
As obsession is a kind of madness.

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

Beatan = Beaten.
What an unusual flow of words. As if in the presence of something uncontrolable yet willing to be understood. Again The word Snobness threw me of and in arrogance and or looking down at or Snubnesss?
All and all it seems that from an observer that sees the intentional or unintentional desire from some to make an impact. The impact of course at tims too much. The consequences at times disastrous. So it makes a plea to your inner strength so as to be able to withstand the pressure of life.

Intense

Thankyou

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks Rene, for a nice and deep review, and for correction of the word beaten

[Wandervogel]

Surely this is one of my favourite poem.....loved reading it...

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you sir :)

[MomzillaNC]

You've taken a hard look at the rigid attitudes people take in their pursuit of ideals -- dogma. When an inflexible personality begins an effort to make a difference, it seems they too becomes part of the problem. There were a couple of new words I had to look up. :D I like seeing a poet stretch themselves and work the language like that. I'm not sure the average reader would agree, but I like seeing it.

NOTES: I had difficulty tracking a meter. While I don't think poems always need meter, this one seems to be trying to find one.

What is the meaning of "manea?" I couldn't find it anywhere.

Given your use of plant biology terms, maybe more imagery of plants would help the reader glean the meaning of those terms without resorting to a dictionary.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot :)

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[stars are far]

that was greatness.. you did a great work here .well done

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot :)

[Sami Khalil]

You describe madness in a realistic way and even to its roots. Bravo, sir...:).............

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks dear friend :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).........