Madness

Do turn mad,
When beatan up to unbearable depth,
Of a conflicting cerebral chamber,
Suffocating under the mask of normality,
When different things are struggling,
Within you and without you, do not
Try to crush those contracted truths,
But let them feed on just as a,
Cuscuta, on the rot of your appearence,
Do not give meristematic touch to,
Your snobness, but be obsessed,
With the primary colors of innocence,
Feel the mirth of ignorance or be,
In the manea of being ignored,
Find the obsession within you, for you,
As obsession is a kind of madness.

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

Beatan = Beaten.
What an unusual flow of words. As if in the presence of something uncontrolable yet willing to be understood. Again The word Snobness threw me of and in arrogance and or looking down at or Snubnesss?
All and all it seems that from an observer that sees the intentional or unintentional desire from some to make an impact. The impact of course at tims too much. The consequences at times disastrous. So it makes a plea to your inner strength so as to be able to withstand the pressure of life.

Intense

Thankyou

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks Rene, for a nice and deep review, and for correction of the word beaten

[Jesse Booker]

Love the ending! Very profound work.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much jesse

[Pushkar Prabhat]

beautiful ending!!!
profound poem.
i liked it!
:)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou pushkar for liking :)

[Prabha Salimath]

Yes thinking should not be eteral till it reaches the stage of obsession. Whatever it's be sad or dreadful try to sort out as soon as possible to have good working and alive mind.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot prabha

[Mayank]

"Find the obsession within you, for you,
As obsession is a kind of madness." - these are lines which I have followed from a long.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot mayank for reading and reviewing :)

[Sindu]

Powerful like a punch! A reason in chaos to make sense.
Brilliant write!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much sindu

[Avinash]

A cathartic poem which helps you find peace amidst trouble and chaos. Thanks for sharing.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks Avinash

[M.A.Rathore]

As an obsession is a kind of madness is really well said...The poem is good. I really like some of images very much...Keep it up...please read some of mine and let me know how do I do...

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot dear friend :)

[M.A.Rathore]

Welcome dear friend. Happy Diwali..

[Matching Socks]

Very deep thoughts as always from you.
Well done..

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much ana

[George Peck]

This is another amazing poem great description. I love this poem you never disappoint. Thank You for letting me read.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks so much george :)

[R Smith]

a great poem, very strong descriptions of the state of mind that leads to obsession, a work of art my friend :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot :)