At last

The end of illusions,
Is not very smooth, neither rough,
Yet it is not less painful,
Than the illusion itself,
The hungers of the soul,
Are not really bubbling now,
Yet it is not dead, neither living,
as it was ever,
The haste to elope,
Is delaying its zenith,
Yet it is not slow, neither sombre,
In its desire to flourish

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

No one can say that coincidences don't exsist. I am reading a book with that title the future of illusions....
And this writing has a lot to do with it. Great expression of become aware fo that which we don't need for the sake to bring forward that which really belongs to us but was covered under infinite layers of illusions.

One could find alot of meaning here.

Thankyou

[hardeep sabharwal]

yes its life and many a times we see these coincidences,

thanks for reading and liking :)

[Jesse Booker]

Fascinating read and very well written!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much :)

[Sindu]

The illusion of everything yet nothing.
Fascinating read Hardeep!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much sindu

[Pushkar Prabhat]

illusion: whats real? what's not? how to make sure? even if you know.......are you sure, that that itself is not an illusion?
interesting poem!!!
i liked it!!!
:)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot pushkar

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome...........:) :)

[Mayank]

Life itself is Maya. We flourish with time and elopes with desires. Compromised most of the time.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks mayank for reading and reviewing :)

[Soundsage090]

This piece is awesome. Like an alternate dimension. Thank you for sharing.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot

[Moochi]

Very insightful and relatable. Beautifully written. Enjoyed the poem.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot, glad you enjoyed :)

[stars are far]

that was very great, you did a great work here..
well done, keep up the good work :D

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks for the compliment and wishes

[Prabha Salimath]

A very short piece but holds a beautiful msg for a reader. The end of illusions, let the illusions be ended itself or let us to end the illusion do it as early as possible. Yes illusion as I feel may foster you sometimes but it'll never be that easy to adaptable.

Hungers of soul a very meaningful line Hardeep, it'll never gonna end.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much parbha

[Prabha Salimath]

You are welcome..
Don't mistype my name it looks meaningless.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Sorry for the mistake, it was actually typing error, prabha

[Prabha Salimath]

It's okay.

[redflutterby]

The first four lines are my favorites...this poem may be short but it holds some deep thought within it. Very good work..

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot :)