Ways

Whoever has begged or manipulated,
Competing with the silence of logic,
Residing in the catacomb of heart
Crawling out of viscous love,
Super human, I can not sought,
A bare strive to be human
By limiting the abnormalities of Gods
Accomplishing a passion, an everlasting
But what can be done, even it
Be with you in your ways of living
At every dawn to gaze doorstep
And painting the shades of wait
By mixing the water of my iceness
And colors of your alienness
Not knowing why even, not wished to know
I just want simply to be desired,
only in my own ways,
Brushed in my own colors.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"I just want simply to be desired,
only in my own ways,
Brushed in my own colors."
Beautiful words above. I like the journey in your words. We need people who love us for who we are and we must return the same. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks coyote for reading and reviewing

[Angad Waraich]

Ah!
The struggle of acceptance, an age old battle.
Wonderfully written.
I feel as though this has a Hindi version too, right?
If so i would like to read that too.


Thank you
-Angad

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot,,

but it has no other version, I wrote it purely in english :)

[AprilRN1210]

we all want to be accepted/ loved for who/what we are.. take the good with the bad, and share the ugly.. we all need different things and take different paths and it is nice to find someone who "fits".. someone who can color outside of the lines with you, or accept your masterpiece as the unique talent that it is... well done!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot AprilRN for a nice review

[AprilRN1210]

you're welcome :)

[Marie]

People cannot always accept you in your own ways and colours. THey must manipulate and change. THey spectrum of their rainbow is not going to be yours.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Very true marie, thanks for understanding and elaborating :)

[R Smith]

I think this your struggle to be accepted against all the odds stacked against you, at least that is what I see :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Its the struggle of all who found themselves true with their colors,, thanks for understanding

[Sami Khalil]

Your poems are both enjoyable and informative. I'm liking...:)..................

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks sami for liking :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..........................

[Cindy Marietta]

I really enjoy this, I like how it takes a little effort to fully understand, which makes it rewarding. Awesome choice of words! Would love to read some more:)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot, I m glad you enjoyed this piece

[Rene Salinas]

Oh I finnaly understand what's going on here. I get he feeling you are usings some form of translator and then trying to think of the exact meaning back to your original language and hence I'm getting this delightful phrases Hardeep, they are indeed a treat in meaning, but I don't think that they will be everone's "cup of tea" and the likelyhood is that if I like it, most won't and they will wonder. So whoever has deared to compete with the lgoic of silence is in fact dead in the heart. Beautiful! I think you mean they have not got inner silence. That one is not required to be more than human as you strive to be nothing else but human. And that you can't be anything else but yourself as anything else would be pretending and hence you can offer it becuase it is done in honest sincerity.

Will you be accepted?

I hope you will.

Thankyou

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks Rene,,
though I m not blaming anyone but it always said about asian english poets that they use translaters etc,, not going to say it is why just writing here lines from a great indian poetess s poem

"I know three languages,
I write in two and dream in one
Dont write in english they say
English is not your mother tongue
It is half english half indian
funny perhaps,..........



Any language I like
any language I speak becomes mine
......



Thankyou for a lovely review

[Rene Salinas]

Well yes Hardeep is not an issue for me at all. But you need to know that for the rest of the world and just as an example a "Haiku" in japanese is a different form of poetry than a "Haiku" in english. That's why I mentioned it....

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks for your suggestions and I hope that I will always receive your precious reviews and suggestions as a good friend, hope u have not mind my words,, thanks again