Ways

Whoever has begged or manipulated,
Competing with the silence of logic,
Residing in the catacomb of heart
Crawling out of viscous love,
Super human, I can not sought,
A bare strive to be human
By limiting the abnormalities of Gods
Accomplishing a passion, an everlasting
But what can be done, even it
Be with you in your ways of living
At every dawn to gaze doorstep
And painting the shades of wait
By mixing the water of my iceness
And colors of your alienness
Not knowing why even, not wished to know
I just want simply to be desired,
only in my own ways,
Brushed in my own colors.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"I just want simply to be desired,
only in my own ways,
Brushed in my own colors."
Beautiful words above. I like the journey in your words. We need people who love us for who we are and we must return the same. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks coyote for reading and reviewing

[Jesse Booker]

Beautiful! Very well done.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot jesse

[amrit]

what a way ! ur work is always deep and worth spending time on. i liked how u`ve fostered the ending .:)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Amrit :)

[stars are far]

yes that so true, "I'd rather be hated for who i am, than be loved for who i am not", kurt cobain..
so yeah that was very great :D, well done my friend

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much :)

[Briana O'Connor]

I love the depth and beauty in your words. There's a great journey of learning and growing expressed here. Well penned.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks Briana

[Mayank]

"I just want simply to be desired,
only in my own ways,
Brushed in my own colors." -- AMAZING LINES!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot mayank

[ayesha gupta]

expectations always hurt, so i expect less.
to be desired by someone is not under our control..we should leave it to God.
your poem is amazing in literature and the way your expressed it.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Ayesha

[Avinash]

Good work Hardeep. We always see being affected by the manipulation by the society. This constantly attack your identity every step of the way. Once we learn to protect ourselves only then we live. Commendable work.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot avinash

[George Peck]

Another great poem excellent job. Thank You for letting me read.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot :)

[Sindu]

Nice penning of search for acceptance. It has a good tone as the lines are not softened rather show the inner struggle..

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot sindu