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Holding a pen
I sit
Searching a poem
Which is rendering between
Heart and the mess of words
Whom eyes are trying to find
In unknown horizons
Is actually present
In the inner skies
giving a smile to me

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

Clever, the moment when you look up or better said try to find your Muse in order to feel inspired as if touched by grace. Unknown the effects and the level of insipration I garee I guess will depend mainly on what you are looking.

Driven by grace

Thankyou

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Rene for a constructive review

[Erana]

Congrats hardeep,
Reaching to the outside to bring your words to the inside to show
Very nice
~E

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot dear friend :)

[MomzillaNC]

We're all seeking… looking for inspiration… looking for love… hoping… looking forward. You're poem captures all that and the poet's journey to penning it.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks for a kind review

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Beautiful description.
Very well written.
I liked it!
:)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks pushkar a lot

[Sami Khalil]

As poets, thinkers and plain humans we are all searching for someone or something. The unknown horizon beckons to us. The present is a present is we treats it as such. Excellent...:)..............

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou very much dear friend

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).........

[Mayank]

"words hanging low, soon they will flow."
simply beautiful :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot mayank :)

[ayesha gupta]

nice and short, and the title is perfect as it is not yet decided what the poem is about. u stated the phase before writing a poem..sometimes confusing to choose topics..all we want to write something which express our feeling and makes us happy. :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks ayesha for your words and praise :)