wildfire

Ideas without action are useless

Wildfire, abruptly not only
smoulder in jungles,
but also in thoughts too
Blazingly ask
and not even wait for replies
Spread the ashes of
Burning questions
In the air
perhaps want to say
Only ideas are even
As unfruitful as ignorance
Brutally fingers
At all Intellectualists
And burble
Not give just ideas
But give these thoughts shapes too ...

Reviews

[Mayank]

There are various aspects of ideas, I had an idea to kill my boss but I didn't, would that have been useful? there was so much hatred that but I ignored them, was my ignorance unfruitful; the concept of idea work different for everyone, mostly on how someone perceive things. There are rotten ideas which take some shape and spoil the heck of generations...
P.S The idea was useful and it was good.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Dear mayank, see again it is all about intellectualist s positive ideas which.can be fruitful, all over the world people say that if this happen country would be a heaven, if this happen world will be a better place, but they themselves not follow those ideas,
and do you think unlawful thinking are intellectual thoughts,

[Ashira Macy]

A wildfire of ideas, I like the concept. Sometimes ideas spread as fast as wildfires, Wonderful metaphor my friend.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks Ashira a lot

[Avinash]

I feel the ideas put forward just to establish intellectual supremacy are nothing but a sabotage. We are living in a time where everyone just want to publicize , prove rather than do any good. We are living in times of fake happiness and horrible realities. Your wise poem underlines that point quite powerfully.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks Avinash for elaborating the theme, :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Deep man. All the way through

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks Baby Ricochet a lot

[MomzillaNC]

There's wisdom in your prose… the poem makes a strong statement.

There are a few grammatical corrections needed.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot for your praise and suggestions :)

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[Rich13White]

As unfruitful as ignorance is great line...but the last few lines are some what confusing to
me?

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks Rich for stopping by :)

[R Smith]

excellent poem Hardeep, your points are well made and the conclusions correct, to speak without results is a waste of breath :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks Richard a lot :)

[George Peck]

Great until last five lines seem forced. If you rework them it would be a lot better in my opinion.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks george,
actually I have written this poem in hindi and than I translated it in english today, I will for sure work on your suggestions :)