After My Death

Wish for a life death

When I die
Donate Few vulnerable organs
To those, who can use them
of rest of me, creamate a part
And throw ashes half at Kiratpur
Where my ancestors rests
And spread the other half
Over a mountain all over the valley
Bury the other part somewhere
in the cold north
May be in this way
I can be able to live
In one form and
Obtain peace in the other ...

Reviews

[Avinash]

Beautiful wish for post death scenario but what about life? We are here to play our roles and play it good. It is too early for you to fantasize your death. You do that only when you lose all your dreams for life. Sorry to be so direct. But I do feel this poem is born out of self pity and a beautiful life like yours should rather be thinking about life and keep on fantasizing about it. That is why god sent you here.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks Avinash
You are write as u always are that god has given us this life to live in a vital way and we are here to fulfill our dreams and aspirations

I want to add if you see in this poem there is a wish to live after life and longing for peace which id sometimes a distant dream in this modern life

[Avinash]

Never give up :) And I wish you best. Yes the pain also helps us in appreciating life..

[R Smith]

You'll certainly be spread far and wide, I like this because its new and unusual, never seen many works in this form of story, you have truly created, well done.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks my dear friend Richard a lot :)

[Frieda P]

Live in one form, and obtain peace in the other, sounds like an everlasting dream, one can only hope death is so kind....

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Frieda P. :)

[Frieda P]

Was my pleasure. :)

[Rich13White]

Definitely interesting...

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks dear friend :)

[MomzillaNC]

Lovely plans for your remains. But… ummm… 1/2 at Kraptur and 1/2 over the mountain. Where does the other part come from? :D

[hardeep sabharwal]

:)

wishes can be anything, we cant bound them in whats and wheres :D

[MomzillaNC]

As you wish…