Lost love

Even love changes

We are sitting so near
but feeling remote,
need of a cool breeze,
But air is hot,
desires are the same,
Same lovers, same is the spot,
but passion is lost,
one who was someone special
why is so normal now,
Lovers changed like season
Without saying a sigh
neither show a dot,
looking at each other
with eyes full of grief
no one is expressing love
no one is exposing heart
Not even in short.

Author's Note

I wrote this when I was 19 year

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

you have expressed the way two people can grow apart.. love does change... it takes that exposing and expressing to let it grow.. takes nurturing... takes work.... nice, short concise lines that flowed well and helps the reader to FEEL what you are feeling.. nice job!

[hardeep sabharwal]

thanks AprilRN

[LL]

Nice poem and you did a great job conveying your feelings--Levi

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot levy :)

[LL]

Your welcome:)

[Ashira Macy]

It is hard to drift away from someone, but sometimes it is necessary for both people to grow into who they are meant to be. This was a really wonderful piece.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Ashira Macy :)

[Sindu]

Love changes.. So does every form of relationship. Some choose to accept while others ignore, hoping it to set right somehow.
Its nice that you started writing from such a young age. Concise and clear.

[hardeep sabharwal]

thanks a lot sindu

[George Peck]

Love is hard because it takes a lot for it not to end up that way. my wife and I are starting to drift like in the poem.but we are trying to fix because we did notice some never do and thats why they end. This was a great poem.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks george and I hope that everything will be fine again in your life

[Sami Khalil]

So much truth and relevance in the meaning of this poem. Thank you for sharing...:)......

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot my dear friend

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................

[amrit]

on the funnier side could be harmonal changes :D just kidding ! im 21 so i thought that at first place .:D i liked the lines `Same lovers, same is the spot, but passion is lost` . the feel is quite descriptive . :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Hormonal changes! :D

Thanks amrit

[Mayank]

nicely written... sweet pain of 19 years, huh!

[hardeep sabharwal]

:) thanks mayank

[Debashree Chakraborty]

The funny and tragic thing that love is. Great job for one so young.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks debashree :)