my love for you is everlasting

my love for you is everlasting

the begining was fun

fun filled with conversations of colored excitement of eachothers company

slowly as our lives went on

we grew slowly apart and the love slowly faded

on your side the love faded at an accelerated rate compared to mine.

 

my love for you is everlasting

even though we face the challenges

i am still here waiting for you

hopeing soon you will see the sincirity of treatment i give to you

 

my love for you is everlasting

eventhough it may seem as though my legs gave out miles ago

im still racing for the finishline

of which you will be standing with open arms

outstreatched toward the warmth of love i expell from my body to yours

 

i was once the nicest person to you

you considered me your best friend

until one day when it changed

and in order to keep you from leaving

i had to make a fool of myself through obsinity

 

my love for you is everlasting

through thick through thin

my heart you turned so blue

will still remain open for you

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

my love for you is everlasting
eventhough it may seem as though my legs gave out miles ago
im still racing for the finishline
of which you will be standing with open arms
outstreatched toward the warmth of love i expell from my body to yours

Loved this verse. When reading your work, I am looking for emotional rawness, descriptions and metaphors that bring it alive for me. These are all things that you process nicely. Depending on your goals for your poetry at some point you will need to add capitalizations and punctuation to please the masses. Keep writing for you do have natural talent.

[i wish to win you with ..]

thank you... haha i like u already lol :D

[Anna]

beautifully written