Kids on a Plane

Inspired by my flight to Disney World, I wrote these between peanuts and cocktails.

Turbulence

Thrown out of my seat
As if we hit flocks of birds;
I hope I survive!



Clouds

Kingdom rarely seen
hovers high above the earth.
Cauliflower land.

Reviews

[Luke Brooks]

First of let me say the baest part of the whole piece is the description.
Willy P you are hilarious.

"Turbulence" is funny to me and even though I love that kind of absurb humor I think "Clouds" is my favorite.

The first two lines are so majestic and the last line sums it all up with a great almost tripy line.
Almost feels like a "Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds line".

Good job with this my friend.
I enjoyed them.
And I enjoyed the trip.
We must hang out this Summer.

[Sean Allen]

Nice reference to clouds and turbulence in these Haikus.
Nice to see someone who uses punctuation!
Donn

[Eric Schnell]

That was a beautiful piece! It was flawless to me! I could really envision a couple of kids going to Disney World soaring through the cloud kingdom of Mario and their imaginations as the turbulence terrorizes excitement!..Very Great Write!

[Butch Mcpeterson ( I Ca..]

Nice little haikus man.... I like them.... It was a good trip and yes that cauliflower line is amazing lol

Keep up the good work man

Your pal,
Butch.

[Steven Silvey]

That first one was pretty intense, man. I'm glad that we did survive that ride. The second one actually passed through my head as we flew. Not the cauliflower part. I thought about how I'd like to live in the cloudy kingdom above earth. I'd be kinda like Lakitu from Mario.

Great poems, Willy.