Spot

This is a poem that i wrote very late at night, half asleep.

Seven years have passed;
Seven years have gone,
Since I lived back in town
with my good friend named Sean.

He slept, and he ran,
Chewing his shoes;
Crazy he was,
Even left me his poos.

One day in disgust
I banged on his door
Said, "Stop leaving me poo,
You sick little w***e!"

The next day I showed the doctor his mess
"Bad news I'm afraid, Sean has IBS."

I was sad for a moment,
But then I decided
That he should be dead
Then I was excited.

It's been seven years
I still miss him a little
'Till I remember his feces
And all of his spittle.

Reviews

[Steven Silvey]

Now that I'm in the correct mind-frame, I will leave you one of my horrid reviews.

Willy. When I stumbled over to the computer, and I saw that you sent me something that you wrote, I ran into the living room to grab Luke, stomping my toe as I went. Now for the review.

One day in disgust
I banged on his door
Said, "Stop leaving me poo,
You sick little w***e!"

The next day I showed the doctor his mess
"Bad news I'm afraid, Sean has IBS."

I, in all seriousness, fell out of my chair when I crossed this. It was just so darn amazing. I for some reason wasn't expecting this level of...Wow. It's incredible, and being the person that I am, I'm sending you a similar poem. I agree that Sean may have been a better name for the poem, but I think that spot is great as well, because the dog left spots as he went.

Man, keep up the good work. It's going into favorites.

[{Angel Redd}[Formerly A..]

How insensitive....haha, just kidding. I thought this was sort of absurd:

"Stop leaving me poo,
You sick little w***e!"

But funny.

[Butch Mcpeterson ( I Ca..]

Nice little poem man....

"disguest".... Is this supposed to be 'disgust'?

I like this man..... I could use a little work but it's a funny little poem..... Keep up the good work man. The more you write the better you get and you are pretty good man. I look foward to reading much more from you man. I'm glad you've decided to join the revolution.

Your pal,
Butch.