Abandoning the Post

All of my friends are slowly leaving the cafe. :(

The cafe is a sad place these days,
At least it is for me.
My friends are packing up to go,
They're tired of the tree.

Each day I check their profiles,
One by one, just to be sure,
But it looks as if they're gone for good,
I wish there was a cure.

I'll be starting college soon
And might never see again,
The people who shared my school and life,
And even called me friend.

I guess I'll just keep writing though,
"The show must go on" and such,
I just wish they were still on here
So I wouldn't miss them so much.

Reviews

[~crazy Beautiful~]

this is sweet, I know the feeling, i miss alot of excellent artists/people on here
nice work
thank you for entering my contest

[Luke Brooks]

Wow Willy this was really good. It flowed perfectly and the rhymes didn't seem forced at all. I miss you man. Nashville is alwesome though. You've gotta come chill soon.

[Steven Silvey]

I'm sorry to leave, but I'm pretty much never on here, and I don't want people leaving me reviews that I'll never return.
This was a beautiful poem, and one of your finest. I especially love that first line.
We might see each other again. I mean, we're still in the same state and all.
I might see you at the Iron Bowl! If either of us goes.

[Kim]

such a sad thought of loosing friends. But just because they leave the cafe does not mean they leave you. And your just starting college, you have so much ahead of you. They say some of your best friends are made in college. I feel your pain in this poem, but don't give up hope!