To the one who dance with Cherubs

Oh! Distant hue of blood and gray,
Makes cherubs weep for bitter May,
When their false embraces do take,
Smiles of thee heaven cannot make,

Thou shall outlive these monuments,
In my eternal line's contents
When fading breath shall leave you now,
My tears shall fall beneath my brow,

The stars and I witnessed it all,
When beneath such fair earth you fell,
Echo! Oh you sweet lullaby,
Music to hear in silent cry.

Reviews

[Cassie Fraga]

AMAZING!! you are very talented!! and yes the last 2 lines pack this piece with a punch!! GREAT write!!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I really like this title a lot. The poem is so nice and so nicely written, the flow and the rhyming. I enjoyed this. I really like this line here:
"Smiles of thou heaven cannot make,"
As well as I enjoyed the last stanza.

[Between the grey]

your last two lines perfection, This write is quite amazing. Wonderful set up of emotions, flowed so wonderful. loved the rhyme scheme, very poetic.