Christmas (a Poem)

a four-line Christmas poem

Peaceful, candlelit, cozy

Giving, receiving

In Jesus's name

Celebrate!

Author's Note

This poem is based on an activity in the book "The Night the Stars Sang The Wonder That is Christmas". It asks the reader to write a four-line Christmas poem as follows:
Line 1: Three words that describe Christmas
Line 2: Two "ing" words
Line 3: Sentence or phrase
Line 4: Christmas greeting

Does anyone care to grade my poem? Perhaps you'll attempt your very own Christmas poem based on this activity!

Reviews

[Mary Fioratti]

Really sweet this poem! Loved it!
Let me try to make one:

Hapiness, Blessing, Fireplace
loving, giving
Look at people's eye
Rejoice!

((((hugs)))
*Mary*

[Walk away slow poet]

I like this, it's sitting and well stated. Awesome write