Did You Think?

Did You Think?

A Poem by New Dawn
"

ended relationship

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Did you think I might crumble

as you walked away,

too weak and 'female'

to stand my ground?

Did you think I might beg

for you to stay,

too afraid, too fragile

to cope alone?

Well the truth is

I might have,

but you walked away

too briskly without looking back,

and the words 'I need you'

got caught in my throat

afraid you might hear me

turn and laugh.

Did you think I might struggle?

You wouldn't be wrong

but I'm slowly rebuilding...


I am strong...

© 2012 New Dawn


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. the vulnerability, sensitivity ... and above all ... resilience ... that sparkles in your words inspires me infinitely ... i had lost myself to the injuries of rage and anguish and chaos ... all that remains now is love ... and i'm trying to distill it to its purest form ... if there's one thing i want to be too ... it is being strong ... thank you for this post ... i cannot begin to tell you how much i needed to read it right now ... though the reason is not demolition by a person ... or abandonment ... the reason is something else ... yet these words empower ...

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This is a wonderful piece good luck :)

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. the vulnerability, sensitivity ... and above all ... resilience ... that sparkles in your words inspires me infinitely ... i had lost myself to the injuries of rage and anguish and chaos ... all that remains now is love ... and i'm trying to distill it to its purest form ... if there's one thing i want to be too ... it is being strong ... thank you for this post ... i cannot begin to tell you how much i needed to read it right now ... though the reason is not demolition by a person ... or abandonment ... the reason is something else ... yet these words empower ...

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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New Dawn
New Dawn

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I have always written to some extent. seem to be leaning toward poetry at moment. In my other existance I am a nurse , wife , mother of three. Just like to share and get back some constructive critici.. more..

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