Love in five words

for love in five words contest

you
      you
             you
                  you
                       you

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

I just don't know how you found the words--while managing to completely avoid the pronoun "I."
In addition, the poem appears to have depth.
It also rhymes.
You-nique work, creative hap!

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I agree with MW that it is reminiscent of a heartbeat. It surprised me when I got here and it jumped off the page. Amazing how the word repeated, and just 5 times can carry so much meaning. You are very clever and insightful! Hope you win.

[New Dawn]

Sorry to say I didn't win - there were far better efforts rewarded - but I feel happy with this as simple as it is and is all that really matters.

[Marie]

Ohters have entered this contest...your submission is unique...

[Falling Leaf.]

Makes me think of a heartbeat. I'm not sure why, but it's simply lovely. Quite a surprise, but so very true! I thought of my sweetheart and smiled. Well done!

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. oh, i absolutely love this ... you startled me ... and this is just so true ... ah, what a lovely surprise :) ...

[Jordan Easley]

Nice idea. I think this piece serves its purpose. I don't know much about that contest, but this is definitely original.