Because of Him

Because of him my heart pounds

Because of him my legs shake

Because of him my eyes water

Because of him I fall to my guilt and release it at his feet

 

God once told me where there is darkness there is also light

So I look to my Father whom I trust with my life

With him I discovered the true meaning of love

He sends a message just like Noah did with the dove

 

God, he lifted me up

He wiped away the painful tears

God, he sung a sweet lullaby

He sent his angels to say not to have any fears  

 Because It is all alright

God IS on my side

 

Because of him my heart pounds

Because of him my legs shake

Because of him my eyes water

Because of him I fall to my guilt and release it at his feet

 

Oh Lord how you’ve helped me in miraculous ways

When I needed you, you were there

You had more than enough time to spare

Father I lift my hands to show you I am grateful

For your unconditional and beautiful love

 

It is hard to describe what it’s like to have you by my side

To have a friend always there to talk to

To have a father always there to comfort you

To have a protector always watching over you 

Author's Note

I need everyone to be brutally honest right now. Im trying to write song lyrics and need advice

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like how this flows, and it is very heartfelt. My favorite parts are the two ending stanzas, the Lord can help us in miraculous ways if we let Him. I am also thankful what he has done in my life and how He shows His "unconditional and beautiful love," which sends tears flowing from my eyes when I really truly experience it. I'm not sure how it would sound as a song, I think it would sound good but I guess I would have to hear it, or know what kind of tune you are going for.

Great Job

[xhannyx]

Thank you!

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're welcome ^^