Ode to coffee

Each time I wake up
with a head that is aching
I yearn for a cup
that might give me a waking

and help me expell
the pain i'm enduring
I think you know well
to what I'm refering

A steaming hot mug
of coffee with cream
I've chosen my drug
and it tastes like a dream

Hot down my throat
Oh my, the sensation!
I'm starting to float
to a place of elation

As I open my eyes
the sky seems much bluer
I will now roll the dice
cause my problems are fewer

So let fate do his worst
I am poised for attack
I have sated my thirst
watch out world, I'm back!

Author's Note

First submission! Be gentle :)

Reviews

[deleted]

I love coffee, and the rhyme and pattern work very well! It's lighthearted, yet uses a mature vocabulary. :) I wouldn't change a thing.

[sweet candy]

i luv the ryhme and the topic and ofcourse i luv coffee
really the poem is soo nice,nice work ;)

[roarke]

A winner right out of the gate. Your the most positive and happy sounding java joe I've ever seen. lol I take mine black. rhyme and rhythm are spot on and it jaunts along keeping the reader caffeinated. Good stuff.

[Danielle M.]

Haha, very nice poem. Good topic to use a start of your online writing career. Very nicely done!

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Mmm! Dontcha just love coffee?
I have two cups every morning sometimes more.
This write make sme thirsty for a cup.
Very nicely written.