What Does She See In You

i try to find the right things to say

day after day

i don't know if i can handle this

we walk by eachother everyday

not even looking at one another

not even a simple hello

how long can this go on

why are things so wrong

its so frustrating

i just sit here in deep though

wondering why she fough

what does she even see in you

noone can get through to you

what does she see in you

this will be forever unknown

because everyday we walk by eachother everyday

not even looking at one another

Reviews

[KWP]

I like this, you have articulated the thoughts of many after an argument ... what I have learnt over the years is it costs nothing to say I am sorry, and it will always be the bigger person to break ground first, I have always chosen to be the bigger person .... then .... amazingly all those fears, doubts and negative energy is washed away in almost an instant.

nice work ... you may want to edit the few mistakes :) xx

[A. Amos]

because everyday we walk by eachother everyday
not even looking at one another

Intereating piece of work my friend, above line i truly enjoyed.