Anchor

Anchor

A Poem by hmarieee
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We all feel a little down sometimes and feel like we can't deal with anything anymore, but we can.

"
like an anchor
i sink to the bottom
dark and deep
unable to see
i seek something
to hold my ground
nothing but emptiness
surrounds me
at the bottom of the sea
fish swim by
just a short glimpse
until they are gone
where did it all go wrong
trying to bring myself up
but like an anchor
it is tough
an angler fish
swims by me
for a second i can see
the horrors of being drug down to the bottom
leaves me mortified
and leaves me hopeless
stuck in this deep abyss
dark 
not blue
black as can be
i see other anchors
reaching out towards me
our chains intertwine 
still blind
one gets pulled up
so do i
together we can get out of this
deep dark abyss
breaking our chains
to be so much more
the future has so much in store
the water starts to warm up
the sun shining bright
up to the top
finally free
away from the cold blinding dark
to a new start
trying to hold myself up
so i no longer sink

-hannahmarie <3 2/9/14

© 2014 hmarieee


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emptiness, sinking, anchors. These are all familiar terms, familiar circumstances that I have gone through. but I like how you deal with it by writing. I hope writing can save you from being empty, best of luck

Posted 10 Years Ago


you've created an amazing poem. keep up the great write! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


it's message is deep (no pun intended) and the words tell the story well

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was truly beautiful and amazing.. Great work Hannah!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I can relate to this completely. i love how you told a story of recovery. super amazing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You always grab my heart with such entangled emotions, Hannahmarie...
I understand your need to stay afloat... (and you convey it to your readers well)...

You express a tumultuous wave of pain... but in the end I see your optimism surfacing....
for me, it is a life-line thrown to the depths of your despair.

Well penned, sweet girl!~xoxo~:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I know the feeling of this poem. Falling down and not able to rise up. I did like the positive ending. Old wise saying. "Come a place where we can fall no more. We have no place to go but to rise again." Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Real, emotional piece. I love the inspiring ending :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


One of my fav you wrote with so much feeling and passions, your words felt alive good job my friend

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on February 9, 2014
Last Updated on March 9, 2014
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