Urges

The urges are back... I don't know what to do.

Urges

 

Depression hits

I feel alone

Darkness surrounding me

Let me be

I plead

Set me free

The urges are back

My wrists

Memories

I look back

See the slits

The blood trickles out

Self-harm

No doubt

I hate feeling this way

The urges

They won’t go away

I confessed

Finally talked to you

Admitted the truth

You shut me out

Wouldn’t hear me out

Now the memories flood in

I’m depressed

Back then I was to

I tried talking to you

You denied the truth

Said I was lying

Can’t you see I’m trying

Staying up all night

Crying

Trying to get through to you

Honestly

I don’t know what to do

Reviews

[chicandsleek77]

a flood of emotion. i know how it feels to cry all night and this made me feel a little less alone.

[genocide]

i feel like this a lot myself very good poem

[annabellee]

I loved the rythm of this one, really well done :)

[Chris]

So many images flow behind my eyes...
other places, other times
tomorrows that never came
tomorrows that DID come
...and yesterdays -
so many damn yesterdays.

[David Burke]

You are really good, please keep writing I love reading your work :)

[hmarieee]

Thank you so much.

[David Burke]

you're welcome

[FlatLineBeauty]

I just wanna reach through the screen and give you a big squeezie hug. xo Winter

[hmarieee]

This comment just made my night. Thank you so much.

[writing mojo]

this one gut checked my soul, where a scar is nothing more then the word "cut"...great expressive piece

[hmarieee]

thank you very much.

[Laura Harrison]

wow, this brings back some bad memories. Very powerful poem. well done hannah :)

[hmarieee]

Thank you very much.

[koty bell]

This poem honestly broke my heart sorry ur having to deal with this great poem though well written

[hmarieee]

It's fine and thank you koty.

[koty bell]

its really not fine tho its pretty unfair..im so sorry ur struggling hon :-(

[hmarieee]

I'll be okay. :) msg me?

[koty bell]

Hope so ..and maybe haha how?

[hmarieee]

i'll message you.

[Neon]

Painful poem with some of your deep emotions of your life that's came from your love. Nicely transformed the feel of your heart into the frame of words.

[hmarieee]

Thank you.