Coffee and Cigarettes

I have very bad anxiety from things that have happened to me so to cope I smoke cigarettes and I also just so happen to like coffee.

Coffee and Cigarettes

 

my day would be okay

if everyone knew the truth

if everyone accepted each other

like me and you

coffee and cigarettes

are what keep me alive

keep me from dying inside

my escape

from my horrible fate

why is everyone so quick to judge

finding out the truth

now holding a grudge

so immature

so unsure

cocaine and meth

afraid of death

anxiety

bringing us down

society teaching

the wrong of the world

the older, the wiser

still unforgiving

younger generations

corrupt and ignorant

afraid to be different

not a needle in my arm

not having to get high

not causing any harm

what's the point

don't be upset

in not a joint or a 40 ounce

just let me be me

afraid of judgment

resentment

not self harm or suicide

judgment

making me feel dead inside

deep inside I want to cry

just to be accepted

afraid of being rejected

maybe I'm crazy

but let me cope

sit back and let me run my own show

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like coffee and a good cigar. A good place to be. I want to be the old man by the sea. Writing poetry and story. Living my own life without concern for the opinion of others.
"maybe I'm crazy
but let me cope
sit back and let me run my own show"
You are not crazy. Good coffee and a cigarette give us some kind of peace. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[hmarieee]

Yes Coyote, I agree that it does gives us some kind of peace. I wrote this mostly in anger towards authority which explains the " sit back and let me run my own show"

thank you for your review.
-hannahmarie xo

[ron]

Very nice. I agree there is to much judgment in the world. As long as you don't hurt any one who are others to judge how we live our own lives.

[hmarieee]

I agree, people are to quick to judge and it makes the world a horrible place.

[ron]

I have felt others prejudices. And I have felt compassion and acceptance for things others do not understand. So much is wasted on hate for things that are foreign. You write with passion and for that I am thankful.

[Sarah Lynn]

Coffee and a cigarette , any smoker can deff relate and say its the most peaceful and enjoying thing in the morning...or any time of day really...

[hmarieee]

I agree. Thank you for your review hun.

[Sarah Lynn]

No problem !

[justin bluebuds]

coffee and cigs! i hear ya there!! haha, but seriously everyone has there 'for me' 'coping crutches'! i liked it x

[hmarieee]

Thank you very much.

[David Burke]

That was amazing, wonderful job :P

[Chris]

Strong flow and understandable lines...

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:: the world would be so much more poetic if people could accept people as they are without being judgmental... :: i relate to your post... powerful poetry...