Maybe

My heart is broken in the best way.

My heart is broken in the worst way.

There's a thread connecting every part of me,

and if one delicate breeze were to arrive,

I would collapse. You can make me collapse.

But it makes me feel alive.

I'm discovering feelings that are new.

Scary, beautiful feelings.

Feelings that I never knew I could have towards something.

Someone.

But you're not just someone.

Maybe you never have been just someone.

Maybe you never will be.

I'm just terrified that maybe all I'll ever be is just someone to you

Author's Note

constructive criticism is encouraged and appreciated as always

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

feelings are scary...and relationships can build you up or they can make you "collapse" as you so nicely said in that one line.

but one thing they can do is make you feel alive. and i like the someone part. and the transition into it.

nicely done.

[Sami Khalil]

"But it makes me feel alive.
I'm discovering feelings that are new.
Scary, beautiful feelings.
Feelings that I never knew I could have towards something.
Someone."
I like that...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem. Good to know you are needed and loved. I like the flow of thoughts and the question at the end. The question of love can make us crazy. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote