look

look

A Poem by hannahjchin

They always told you
your hands were your best
feature. Your height, your smile,
your laugh, your hair..

Your eyes, but they were wrong.
They did not mean it the way I did.
See, I always thought your best feature
was your eyes.

Your plain eyes
that weren't piercing,
nor did they posses a wildness or
a distinct attractiveness.
warm? yes, but not overwhelmingly so.

Windows to the soul?
maybe. but that's not 
why I loved them.

I loved how you looked.
No, not how you appeared,
how you looked.

I loved where you found beauty
where you sought worth.
I loved the way I could close my eyes
and feel the sunlight penetrate
my eyelids
and warm my insides,
just the way I knew you did.

I loved the way you saw the rain,
the dashboard of your car, the movement
of a shadow. How quick you were to catch
the flicker of change.

I loved the way you saw beyond my lies
and my defenses. How your eyes
stripped down fantasy into gritty reality,
but by doing so, making my life beautiful.

I loved the way you, because of your eyes, 
held your tongue, and thus earned the mark of wisdom
that people so often so in your eyes.

Many people do not know you like I do.
Nor will they. But I can hope
that one day,

I can look like you.

© 2011 hannahjchin


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beauty is in the eye of the beholder : )

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