Untitled #13

Untitled #13

A Poem by hannahjchin

I hide in God's shadow
as my heart is immured
and panic rises to a
place above my tightly
closed eyelids.

Stripping me of,
of the dignity I 
have pretended to own.

Painfully smoldering 
contending desires.

In wanting you so much,
my feelings have slipped themselves
into the realm of subconcious
contempt, and scared me away.

© 2011 hannahjchin


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This is SO beautiful! I love your writing style, and the way in which you word things is so unique & authentic. I love every stanza, but I would have to say the last one is my favorite, because it shows the most emotion and really touches the reader. Awesome, awesome, awesome poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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