Untitled #36

Untitled #36

A Poem by hannahjchin

I sit
my legs swing over the
edge of the world
so far. The birdsong has 
receded into yesterday

left. right.
back. forth.
they swing
and I laugh into a space so
vast 


that when my echo does
return
my great grand-children will be shocked motionless by 
unfamiliarly familiar laughter.
it seems off,
like a memory or dream,
they will not realize that I have laid it 
out,
for them,
in them.

this far, at the edge
of the world
stars are in reach
and I blow on them like
i would a Dandelion
and I watch as they twirl and collide.
Who knew one could
find such deep joy
in solace,
sitting at the edge of the world.

left. right.
back. forth.

© 2011 hannahjchin


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I really like the second verse. And the third verse. Well, I like the whole freakin' thing. Well written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like this its gentle to the soul

Posted 13 Years Ago



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