Where are you now?

A cascade poem for a cascade poem contest... I miss my grandpa...

Wait

He’s gone

It’s not right

His laugh lingers

It haunts me at night.

Grandpa, where are you now?

Please breathe, tell me what to do.

Give me a bear hug, ask what’s new.

Tears scream for my weak voice. I miss you!

Reviews

[Banished]

this is sooooo sad!!!
i think im gonna cry =[
this makes me think of my own grandpa who i miss every single moment of my life.
this was really good.
i like how you structured this, slowly building up the length of each line.
it was short, but effective.
great job.

-Banished

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[CircusNerd]

i love you hannah peters, you're like my bestest friend in the world :)

[rash]

nice. very, very cool.