Scars

I can feel the pain,

And I start to panic.

I claw at my skin,

Trying desperately,

To release it within.

These bright red marks,

They hurt me so much,

They leave the scars,

Burning bright in my mind.

When they drip down my skin,

I sigh with relief.

I have released this pain,

So I let the tears flow.

They bathe the wounds,

Healing the death.

I cannot seem to stop,

I have to let go of the pain,

But why won't my mind?

These bright red marks,

They hurt me so much,

They leave the scars,

Burning bright in my mind.

Reviews

[Amanda]

Very well written

[Destinyxi]

Really nice description. I can definitely imagine this.

When they drip down my skin,
I sigh with relief.
I have released this pain,
So I let the tears flow.

I like that part the most. Great write!

[earthtohannah]

Thank you for all your reviews! :)

[Heather]

Woow.. such expression, emotion and feeling with such strength.. brings out tons of imagery.. truly spoken

[Shy Girl]

a very dark and raw write for one to embark..
but well wrote as well...goodness so sad and loads of deep roots :)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Emotionally deep and raw written piece. Nicely done.

[Lydia]

I really like this. Very emotional, and deep.