Secrets

This darkness

That envelops me,

Will it ever go?

Will I break free,

Of these chains

That bind me

To this world?

Can I say the

Words

Out loud,

Can I tell

You

This secret of mine.

This secret,

So secret,

It's locked deep inside

My heart.

Because this

Thunderstorm

Lightning

Wind

Rain

All inside

My head,

Will never go away.

I will fight this

Battle

By myself.

I do not

Need your help,

I do not

Need your comfort.

I am strong,

I will do this.

I can live

My life

As life should

Be lived

For some

Who lives

In the darkness.

Reviews

[Destinyxi]

Finally found someone who uses a format close to mine, yay haha. Really nice poem. I like how some of the words rhyme and I like the flow of the poem. Keep it up :)

[Kelsy]

Really secretive and keeps me pondering 'What really could be this secret' and least i forget It's....It's....It's... (jeez what's the word) Yes!-Impeccable (that good)