The ocean is just like us

The ocean currents, full of color,excitement,and love

The ocean is the mirror that reflects the skies

Full of colors,blue,white,and grey

Moves by the wind and energy it contains within it

The water connects from one part of the world to the other

Just like us and every other living creature

We see ourselves and our reflection in almost everything

We see,touch,and smell

We are connected to others, no matter how far apart we are

Love is something we carry,it can never disappear

It’s like atoms and molecules, they’re everywhere

Reviews

[Jared Grace]

Good imagery and good work at linking the ocean to humanity and life in general. This poem is quite the riveting piece

[Quinn]

Really like the poem. I love how it's written and it really shows how you've thought of the idea.

[joshua deathdealer]

I read in a science journal one time..that sunlight is apart of every molecule that makes up us as human beings and also in plants... So if God is the light of the world and God is also love...

[Eddie Davis]

You have a very acute sense of the relationship between all living things in the world. Very nice.

[Bluefire]

Strange, thought provoking and intriguing.
The end doesn't quite seem to be the end. I wonder if there was more to be written.
Anywho, I like the idea to this. The story and the way you described it.
Very unique.
Well done. ^^

[Sam]

Ah, connectedness. How true, and how profound. I never thought about people that way. Like an ocean that is.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I like this. You have an awesome point. The ocean is a lot like us and it has its ways for being different too. The vivid imagery and the flow mixes well together. This is one of the first work I have read by you and I am thoroughly impressed. What inspired you to write this piece? I would like to know. I am always curious on how a writer gets her/his idea for their piece. Wonderfully penned!