TRAPPED IN A DREAM.

TRAPPED IN A DREAM IS A STORY TOLD BY A YOUNG MAN WHO HAS FALLEN IN LOVE WITH A DREAM, THAN LATER LEARNS THAT THIS IS HIS LIFE, AND THAN HE WANTS TO GO BACK AND FIX IT BUT HE CANT.

WHEN HE RAISED HIS GLASS TO TAKE A SIP,HE NOTICED A PRETTY FEMALE ACROSS THE BAR FROME HIM RAISING HER GLASS TOWARDS HIM LIKE MAKING A TOAST.

SO SWALDO THOUGHT TO HIMSELF, MAYBE THE LADY WANTS A RIDE, HE DIDNT RECOGNIZE HER SO HE FIGURED HI REVIEWERSMAYBE SHES A FARE.

Author's Note

HI REVIEWERS, MY NAME IS HANK AND I WOULD LIKE FOR YOU TO REVIEW MY STORY.
THIS IS MY FIRST TRY AT WRITING ANYTHING SO ALL CRITICISIM WELCOME.

Reviews

[Marie]

Well, it's off to an interesting start, but I think it would read easier in lower case instead of all caps. Also, there are a few mistakes you ought to correct.